鄭州市 2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（10）附參考范文
鄭州市 2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（10）附參考范文
(201*·鄭州質檢)
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案與解析：
1．healthy→health 這里是句子的主語，因此用名詞形式。
2．by→on/upon depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps 這句話的主語是動名詞短語doing sports and games。動名詞短語作主語表示一件事時，謂語動詞用第三人稱單數形式。
4．but→and feel tired和get sick是并列關系，不表示轉折，因此將but改為and。
5．去掉them 這是一個定語從句，從句中作動詞do的賓語的關系代詞that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming 應用動名詞與前面的running，walking并列，故應用swimming。
7．去掉in every day可以單獨作狀語，前面不需要加介詞。
8．giving→given 這里是被動語態，因此用過去分詞。
9．take前加to 此處考查的是have time to do sth.的結構。
10．√ (2)(25 min.)
(2024·瀏陽一中月考)假如你是中學生李華。在一位名叫WolfDad的學生家長的博客上，你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。
I'm the father of a fourteen-year-old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?
寫作要點：
1. 表明自己的看法；
2. 陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；
3. 提出至少兩條建議。
寫作要求：
1. 短文字數不少于120(不含已寫好的部分)；
2. 內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫；
3. 書寫須清晰、工整。
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【參考范文】One possible version：
Hi, WolfDad,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.
Yours,
Li Hua
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鄭州市 2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（10）附參考范文
(201*·鄭州質檢)
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案與解析：
1．healthy→health 這里是句子的主語，因此用名詞形式。
2．by→on/upon depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps 這句話的主語是動名詞短語doing sports and games。動名詞短語作主語表示一件事時，謂語動詞用第三人稱單數形式。
4．but→and feel tired和get sick是并列關系，不表示轉折，因此將but改為and。
5．去掉them 這是一個定語從句，從句中作動詞do的賓語的關系代詞that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming 應用動名詞與前面的running，walking并列，故應用swimming。
7．去掉in every day可以單獨作狀語，前面不需要加介詞。
8．giving→given 這里是被動語態，因此用過去分詞。
9．take前加to 此處考查的是have time to do sth.的結構。
10．√ (2)(25 min.)
(2024·瀏陽一中月考)假如你是中學生李華。在一位名叫WolfDad的學生家長的博客上，你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。
I'm the father of a fourteen-year-old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?
寫作要點：
1. 表明自己的看法；
2. 陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；
3. 提出至少兩條建議。
寫作要求：
1. 短文字數不少于120(不含已寫好的部分)；
2. 內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫；
3. 書寫須清晰、工整。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【參考范文】One possible version：
Hi, WolfDad,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.
Yours,
Li Hua
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