考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改28

　　I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and am therefore writing to apply for the position.

　　I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards development of your company.

　　Im looking foward to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours Sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and (建議加I)am therefore writing to apply for the position. I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and (加I)can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards (加定冠詞the)development of your company. Im looking forward(拼寫錯誤，forward) to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 點評：6分第二段的第二部分內容給人感覺很空曠，要讓你的內容更加充實。

　　I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and am therefore writing to apply for the position.

　　I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards development of your company.

　　Im looking foward to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours Sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and (建議加I)am therefore writing to apply for the position. I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and (加I)can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards (加定冠詞the)development of your company. Im looking forward(拼寫錯誤，forward) to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 點評：6分第二段的第二部分內容給人感覺很空曠，要讓你的內容更加充實。