高考考研英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作技巧與模板
1.邀請(qǐng)信2.申請(qǐng)信/求職信3.告知信.4.感謝信
5.推薦信6.建議信7.道歉信8.祝賀信9.投訴信
10.求助信11.普通書(shū)信/電子郵件
1.邀請(qǐng)信
[寫(xiě)作思路]
邀請(qǐng)信是邀請(qǐng)收信人參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的書(shū)信,在寫(xiě)作時(shí),語(yǔ)氣要熱情真摯,不要強(qiáng)人所難, 其結(jié)構(gòu)為:
①表明寫(xiě)作意圖,向某人發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。②說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)的具體原因,邀請(qǐng)的內(nèi)容。③期待對(duì)方 接受邀請(qǐng),并表示感謝。
[經(jīng)典句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
(DWere throwing a surprise party for....Wed like to invite you to.../Its my honor to invite you to...
我們將為.....舉辦驚喜派對(duì)。我們想邀請(qǐng)你...../我非常榮幸地邀請(qǐng)你.....
②We are having/planning... on... and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.
我們將于.....舉行.....,如果你能加入我們就太好了。
(§)1 am writing to invite you to.../Im writing to tell you that there will be a...
我寫(xiě)信邀請(qǐng)你...../我寫(xiě)信告訴你有一個(gè)(場(chǎng)).....
(4)1 am very pleased to invite you to participate in...to be held from...to...in... 我很高興邀請(qǐng)你參加從......到......在舉行的......
⑤It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to...
如能邀請(qǐng)你參加…是我莫大的榮幸。
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)
①Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.活動(dòng)的細(xì)節(jié)如下。
(2)1 would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
我想在那里見(jiàn)到你,請(qǐng)盡快告訴我你的決定。
③I am sure you will have a good time at...
我相信你們?cè)?....將會(huì)玩得開(kāi)心。
3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) would feel very honored 遷 you could come.AVe would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience./An early reply is appreciated.
如果你能來(lái),我將倍感榮幸。/如果你能盡早在統(tǒng)椎時(shí)確認(rèn)參加,我們將不勝感激。/ 感激你的早日回復(fù)。
②My phone number is.../Looking forward to...
我的電話(huà)號(hào)碼是....../盼望......%
③My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能來(lái),我和我的黎*£感到非常榮幸。
(4)1 hope that you wont decline my invitation.
Kr
我希望你不會(huì)拒絕我的邀請(qǐng)。
⑤ Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to...? 如果你能來(lái).....請(qǐng)寫(xiě)信告訴我,好嗎?
⑥ If you are interested in it, let me know and Fll send you more information. 如果你對(duì)此感興趣,告訴我,我會(huì)給你發(fā)送更多的信息。
[黃金模板]
Dear ,(邀請(qǐng)對(duì)象)
Hows everything with you?Im writing to tell you that there will be a (活動(dòng))at/in (地點(diǎn))on (時(shí)間).I wonder 遷 you,d like to go with me.(發(fā)出邀請(qǐng))
The occasion will start at .(具體時(shí)間)This will be followed by a .(迸一步 的安排)At around (時(shí)間),.(另一個(gè)安排)
If you are interested in it,let me know. Hope to meet you at the ./I really hope you
can make it.(再 次邀請(qǐng))My phone number is (電話(huà)號(hào)碼).Looking forward to .
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
[范文鑒賞]
Dear Jim,
Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I intend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.(點(diǎn) 出活動(dòng); 發(fā)出邀請(qǐng))
This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers,like you and me,a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it,let me know and T11 send you more information.(具體時(shí)間、大致內(nèi)容等)
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.(再次邀請(qǐng))
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真題】
[2023-全國(guó)卷III】
假定你是李華,你校將舉辦音樂(lè)節(jié)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的英國(guó)朋友Allen參加,內(nèi)容包
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Fm writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【思路分析】本文是邀請(qǐng)信。
首先確定提綱。先介紹寫(xiě)作目的,提出邀請(qǐng)。然后告知英國(guó)朋友音樂(lè)節(jié)的情況:介紹音樂(lè)節(jié)的時(shí)間、活動(dòng)安排等具體信息,最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。第二,根據(jù)提綱,確定關(guān)鍵T-sJin ,女口: How is everything going? a music festival, in the school hall, The opening ceremony
-w
等。第三,注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)。
【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整,詳略得當(dāng)。并使用級(jí)句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定語(yǔ)從句□ 提升 了文章檔次。
【高考真題】w
(2023-天津卷)
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的船器人興趣小組組長(zhǎng)李津,你的美國(guó)朋友Chris就讀于天津某國(guó)際 學(xué)校,他曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。你打算邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì),參加即將于7月底在天 津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。
(1)比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
(2)邀請(qǐng)他的原因;
(3)訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱,請(qǐng)他提出建議。
注意:(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;
(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;
(3)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:
世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
Im looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本篇書(shū)面要求寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要注意以黎眞一、動(dòng)筆前,一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn),理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),跑題偏題。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:1.代表興趣 小組發(fā)出邀請(qǐng);2.介紹比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等安說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)他的原因,包括Chris曾在 機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng);4.告訴他訓(xùn)練誅劃將發(fā)送其郵箱,請(qǐng)他提出建議。
二、寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),膏本文來(lái)說(shuō),以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement
will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
Yours,
Li Jin
【高考真題】
[2023-全國(guó)卷II】
假定你是李華,想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙(paper-cutting)藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他 寫(xiě)封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
2.展覽內(nèi)容。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.
題目要求寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)外教參觀中國(guó)剪紙藝術(shù)展。寫(xiě)作情境設(shè)置真實(shí),任務(wù)要求符合學(xué)生能力水平,自然地融入了我國(guó)優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化(剪紙paper-cutting)的內(nèi)容,能夠引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在 使用外語(yǔ)了解世界的同時(shí),注重傳承發(fā)揚(yáng)中華民族優(yōu)秀文明成果,運(yùn)用中國(guó)元素講中國(guó)故事, 增強(qiáng)文化自信。該寫(xiě)作貼近學(xué)生生活,學(xué)生有話(huà)可說(shuō)。考生成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意:1.結(jié)構(gòu)釆用三
段成文:第一段自我介紹并引出話(huà)題;第二段具體交代活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);第三段較為詳細(xì)地交代展覽內(nèi)容。2.時(shí)態(tài):以一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3.人稱(chēng):第一人稱(chēng)。4.注意恰 當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使文章自然、流暢。5.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型以提高作文檔次。
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】
Dear Henry,
Im Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know youre interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms一paper-cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
Itll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9: 00 am to 7: 00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon?
I will meet you at 2: 00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Regards, Li Hua
【高考真題】
[2023-全國(guó)卷III】
假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請(qǐng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫(xiě)封 郵件邀請(qǐng)他加入,內(nèi)容包括:
1.球隊(duì)活動(dòng);
2.報(bào)名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to giving training to us every Friday afternoon.
At the same time, we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5:00pm after school.
If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真題】
(2023-浙江卷)
第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作
假定你是李華,計(jì)劃組織一次郊游,請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Chris寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi) 容包括:
1.參加者;
2.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
3.活動(dòng):登山、野餐等。
注意:
r
本試題是一篇半開(kāi)列鮮沒(méi),寫(xiě)作文體是電子郵件,寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信給Chris。要點(diǎn)提示 中只列出了大概內(nèi)容,包扌藍(lán)3點(diǎn)(參加者,時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和活動(dòng)),具體細(xì)節(jié)需要考生自己發(fā)揮。
邀請(qǐng)信一般分為以下幾部分:首先,要列出寫(xiě)信的目的,并發(fā)出誠(chéng)摯邀請(qǐng);其次,要就邀請(qǐng)的具體內(nèi)容給予明確的說(shuō)明,什么時(shí)間,什么地點(diǎn),做什么事情等;最后,要再次表示邀請(qǐng), 希望對(duì)方參加。
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】Dear Chris,
How are you now? ①The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outgoing for us these days. I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful days.
The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. ②We will go to Siming Mountain, where we can have a climb. Whafs more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.
I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.
申請(qǐng)信/求職信
[寫(xiě)作思路]
申請(qǐng)信有很多種,比如求職申請(qǐng)、加入某組織或活動(dòng)的申請(qǐng)、報(bào)考申請(qǐng)、留學(xué)申請(qǐng)等,其目的在于讓對(duì)方了解自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以個(gè)人情況的介紹應(yīng)該是申請(qǐng)信的核心內(nèi)容,應(yīng)盡可能向?qū)Ψ秸f(shuō)明本人的長(zhǎng)處,以便留下好印象,獲得面談的機(jī)會(huì)。由于此類(lèi)題目常有較多的文字提示,寫(xiě)作時(shí)除應(yīng)注意格式上的要求外,也應(yīng)注意審題全面,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),并要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)的變化,避免出現(xiàn)邏輯混亂。其結(jié)構(gòu)為:①點(diǎn)明目的, 自我介紹,點(diǎn)出信息來(lái)源②詳述個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì),簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人要求③表達(dá)感謝,簡(jiǎn)述獲準(zhǔn)后的打算, 期待對(duì)方優(yōu)先考慮。
[經(jīng)典句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) learned on your website that...
我從你們的網(wǎng)站上得知.....
②Im writing to apply for the position of...
我寫(xiě)信申請(qǐng).....的職位。
(§)1 am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qu 我寫(xiě)信推薦自己為的合格人選。
④I am interested in...and wish to enter this significant program. 我對(duì).....感興趣,希望加入到這戸義項(xiàng)目中。
⑤I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to... 我寫(xiě)信給你是希望我可物*個(gè).....的機(jī)會(huì)。
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)蘿
①As an outgoing...! get along well with my classmates.
作為一名外向的.....我和同學(xué)們相處得很好O
②For one thing,! can help...For another thing,! can improve my English,make more friends,and enrich my life.
一方面,我能幫助...…另一方面,我能提高我的英語(yǔ)水平,結(jié)交更多的朋友,并充實(shí)生 活。
③I am confident that Im suitable for.../rm qualified to do.../Im equal to (doing)...
我確信,我適合...../我有做的資格/我能勝任(做).....
3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) would appreciate it if I have the chance of doing/to do...
如果我有做.....的機(jī)會(huì),我將不勝感激。
②Should you offer me an interview,! would be most grateful.Looking forward to your reply
soon.
如果您能給我提供面試的機(jī)會(huì),我將非常感激。期待您的早日答復(fù)。
③I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. 期待在您方便的時(shí)候給我一個(gè)肯定的答復(fù)。
④I would greatly appreciate it 遷you could take my application into consideration. 如果您能考慮我的申請(qǐng),我將不勝感激。
[黃金模板1]
Dear Sir/Madam,
..(簡(jiǎn)單自我介紹)When I was reading the advertisement, 看到相關(guān)廣告后的感受)1 think ifs a good opportunity for me to 因)Therefbre I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
..(陳述本人的性格優(yōu)勢(shì))For one thing,! can
Looking forward to your reply.(表達(dá)期望)
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[高考真題]
[2023-全國(guó)卷I】
假定你是李華,暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí),得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要?jiǎng)“嬷袊?guó)畫(huà)展。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者,內(nèi)容包括:
1.寫(xiě)信目的;
2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì);
3.能做的事情。
注意::
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。
Yours,
Li Hua.
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文甘要求考生寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信,人稱(chēng)使用第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng),時(shí)態(tài)用
2.謀篇布局
書(shū)信格式,稱(chēng)呼和落款文中己經(jīng)給出。首段,寫(xiě)信的目的,中間段寫(xiě)個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事,最后一段總結(jié)。
3.關(guān)鍵詞
根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯有:volunteer,
a Chinese Painting Exhibition, local city, advantages, a good command of, beneficial for, familiarity with, appreciate , take my application into consideration□通過(guò)詞匯鋪墊,我4]就 很容易地行文了,文章寫(xiě)完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫(xiě)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過(guò) 渡性.的詞匯,如 First of all, Besides, to begin with, moreover, as for me, Last but not least, 等,使全文銜接自然,語(yǔ)義流暢。
【參考范文】Dear sir or madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners.
Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【點(diǎn)睛】
本文首段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,表達(dá)了寫(xiě)信的目的;第2段詳細(xì)介紹了個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事情,
an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此處使用了 同位語(yǔ)限制性定語(yǔ)從句。having
heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用 了分詞做狀語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ) 從句及被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a
...
child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分詞和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用 使文章富有條理性。此外,還使用了高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu),如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration 條4牛羽t語(yǔ)從句。
【高考真題2】
第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作
假定你是李華,你校英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)招聘志愿者,接待來(lái)訪(fǎng)的國(guó)外中學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)信應(yīng)聘, 內(nèi)容包括:
1.口語(yǔ)能力:
2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn);
3.應(yīng)聘目的。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求寫(xiě)應(yīng)聘信。
第一步:根據(jù)提示可知,學(xué)校英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)招聘志愿者,接待來(lái)訪(fǎng)的國(guó)外中學(xué)生。要求寫(xiě)封應(yīng)聘信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.口語(yǔ)能力:2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn);3.應(yīng)聘目的。
第二步:根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞(組)。
第四步:連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之礒紿接和過(guò)渡,書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰,保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。
本文內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,語(yǔ)篇連貫,詞數(shù)罷。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式,
[參考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whafs more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
Im particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
告知信
[寫(xiě)作思路]
告知信多是從個(gè)人角度出發(fā),將對(duì)方想要了解的事情告訴對(duì)方,讓對(duì)方知道。告知的
內(nèi)容涉及廣泛:如計(jì)劃安排類(lèi),課外活動(dòng)類(lèi),招聘廣告類(lèi),個(gè)人近況類(lèi),地點(diǎn)建筑類(lèi)等。
首段:介紹信息來(lái)源,點(diǎn)明告知內(nèi)容;
中間段:具體介紹告知的內(nèi)容;
結(jié)尾段:表達(dá)意愿進(jìn)一步提供信息。
注意:告知語(yǔ)氣要客觀而不失友好,內(nèi)容真實(shí)但可以有自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。
【經(jīng)典句式】
首段;信息來(lái)源
1.Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
謝謝你來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)我們的圖書(shū)館。
2.My schedule for the coming summer vacation goes as follows.
對(duì)即將到來(lái)的暑假我的安排如下。
3.Im so glad to learn that you are coming in September. Fve found a place for you. 很高興得知你九月要來(lái)。我己經(jīng)為你找到一個(gè)地方食V
4.Im so happy to know that you are interested in Chinese traditional arts from your letter. 我很高興從你的信中得知你對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)很感興趣。
5.How time flies! I am more than delighted to receive your e-mail. Its a pleasure
to inform you of my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. 臨攵到你的郵件。很高興告訴你高考后我暑假的計(jì)劃。
6.1 read in a newspaper today that a "Learn Chinese,Sing Chinese Songs"Foreigners Talent S how will be held in
Beijing Television Station on July 18.
我在報(bào)上看到“學(xué)中文,唱中文歌”外國(guó)人才藝表演將于7月18日在北京電視臺(tái)舉行。
7.1 am more than glad to receive your e-mail asking for my plan of the coming summer holid ay. I have worked out my schedule. My plans/arrangements are as follows.
我很高興收到你的郵件,問(wèn)我即將到來(lái)的暑假計(jì)劃。我已經(jīng)制訂好了我的計(jì)劃。安排如下.
結(jié)尾段:表達(dá)愿望
1 .If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
如果有什么我能為你做的,我會(huì)非常樂(lè)意都助。
2. If you have any other questions, please let me know. Im looking forward to your coming. 如界您有任何其他同題,請(qǐng)讓我知道。我期待念的到來(lái)。
3.If you have any other questions, please dont hesitate to turn to me for help.
如果你有任何其他問(wèn)題,不要猶豫,找我?guī)兔?/p>
4.Would you be so kind as to give me some practical tips? Hopefully,
I will have a colorful and meaningful summer vacation. I am eagerly looking forward to your kind reply.
你能給我一些有用的建議嗎?希望我會(huì)有一個(gè)豐富多彩的暑假,我熱切地期盼你的回復(fù)。
5.Do you think youd like so? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
你認(rèn)為你會(huì)喜歡嗎?如果不是的話(huà)。我可以給你另找地方。:.貝是得讓我知道。
【黃金模板】
? 折
① 1 am more than glad to receive your e-mail asking for my plan of the coming summer
holiday. (2)1 have worked out my schedule. My plans/arrangements are as follows.
件事)。⑥What do you think of my plan?
⑦Do you have better advice for my plan? /Would you be so kind as to give me some practical tips?⑧ Id appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
【高考真題1】
[2023-全國(guó)卷II】
假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)李華。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽,內(nèi) 容包括:
L比賽信息;
2.賽前準(zhǔn)備;
3.表達(dá)期待。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will
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take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4*^^^話(huà)ill play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we sifduld get fully prepared and practice hard.
So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game.
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件告知隊(duì)友有關(guān)比賽的信息。
本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一封告知信。首先要告知寫(xiě)信目的;然后簡(jiǎn)明扼要地告知排球比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及賽前的準(zhǔn)備事項(xiàng),注意事件信息的三要素:時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物,要交代清楚;第三則要表達(dá)對(duì)隊(duì)友的期待和鼓勵(lì)。
【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整,詳略得當(dāng),并運(yùn)用了高級(jí)句式。rm writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.賓語(yǔ)從句;In order to win the match 不定式彳乍 目 狀語(yǔ)。文章語(yǔ)言流暢,上下文轉(zhuǎn)換自然。
【高考真題2】
[2023-全國(guó)卷 III]
假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)給他回信,內(nèi)
容包括:
1.學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館;
2.主要的運(yùn)■動(dòng)項(xiàng)目;
3.你喜歡的項(xiàng)目。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右:
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本題作文為應(yīng)用文,即給英國(guó)朋友Peter介紹學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況,屬于學(xué)校生活話(huà)題。 這一話(huà)題貼合學(xué)生生活的實(shí)際,學(xué)生并不陌生,奇國(guó)可說(shuō)。
首先可以介紹學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館,場(chǎng)館的位置,大小,開(kāi)放時(shí)間等等。然后簡(jiǎn)要介紹學(xué)校主要開(kāi)設(shè)的體育項(xiàng)目有哪些,可挑選早間兩個(gè)做詳細(xì)介紹,如學(xué)生的活動(dòng)時(shí)間,活動(dòng)形式, 以及此類(lèi)活動(dòng)的好處等。再次簡(jiǎn)要分析自己喜歡的體育項(xiàng)目是什么,并簡(jiǎn)單分析喜歡的原因, 自己從中得到的益處等。;緋*主要釆用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第一人稱(chēng)的方式來(lái)寫(xiě)。
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真題3】
[2023-全國(guó)卷I】
假定你是李華,正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì) 劃。內(nèi)容包括:
(1)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);
(2)內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī);
(3)課前準(zhǔn)備:簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
I am very happy thatmade great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested
in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】隨著時(shí)代的發(fā)展,電子郵件越來(lái)越受廣大中學(xué)生的歡迎,所以寫(xiě)電子郵件是中
學(xué)生經(jīng)常做的事,這種形式的寫(xiě)作貼近學(xué)生生活,使他們感到熟悉。考生成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意:1.
要點(diǎn)要齊全:(1)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);(2)內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī);(3)課前準(zhǔn)備:簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的 歷史。2.時(shí)態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主;3.人稱(chēng):第二人稱(chēng)為主;4.注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞, 使文章自然、流暢。5.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。
【高考真題4】
(2023年?新課標(biāo)I卷)假定你是李華,正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě) 封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括:
(1)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);
(2)內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī);
(3)課前準(zhǔn)備:簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
?W
【思路分析】本文要求寫(xiě)哪沛告知外國(guó)朋友漢語(yǔ)課的時(shí)間和內(nèi)容。
文體:書(shū)信體,一種常見(jiàn)的告知信,相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單
人物關(guān)系:朋友
問(wèn),候語(yǔ)及開(kāi)頭語(yǔ):How are you? / How is everything going? / How are things with you?
/I am writing to you about..../1 am writing to tell you something about....
寫(xiě)信目的:告知上課時(shí)間,內(nèi)容及課前準(zhǔn)備
結(jié)束語(yǔ)如:Looking forward to seeing you again. / Looking forward to your early reply. /Hope to hear from you soon / Best wishes.
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】
Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign
learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高考真題5】
假定你是李華,你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客,發(fā)郵件向你詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)習(xí)
俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
注意:
2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文嚅..
【思路分析】
本文是一篇電子郵件類(lèi)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。餐桌禮儀也是考生比較熟悉的話(huà)題。成文時(shí)注意以
下幾點(diǎn):一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全1.到達(dá)時(shí)間;2.合適的禮物;3.餐桌禮儀。二、時(shí)態(tài):主
要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí);三、人稱(chēng):第二、三人稱(chēng)。四、注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)
或句型,以提高作文的水平;五、適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和插入語(yǔ),使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
布局謀篇:第一段內(nèi)容:?jiǎn)柡驅(qū)Ψ剑R上呈現(xiàn)對(duì)方所涉及的話(huà)題,拜訪(fǎng)中國(guó)家庭,做客時(shí)間的要求和忌諱!第二段內(nèi)容:做客拜訪(fǎng)的合適禮物,可以適當(dāng)延展,初次拜訪(fǎng),親密朋友之間拜訪(fǎng),二次拜訪(fǎng),家庭情況適合的禮物,通用的禮物等。第三段:table manners,可以描 述兩三個(gè)通常的中國(guó)人的餐桌禮節(jié)和忌諱的地方,有鮮明特色之處,最后一句表達(dá)祝愿。
3.時(shí)態(tài),給對(duì)方的建議和說(shuō)明,用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述風(fēng)俗禮儀這是客觀規(guī)律性的東西,用一 般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in
Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay
attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please dont hesitate to contact me.
Yours
Li Hua
【高考真題】
(2023年?天津卷)假設(shè)你是李津,與你以前的外籍教師Mrs. Green 一直保持聯(lián)系。近 日她來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你的近況,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。
(1)簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活;
(2)告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者,并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn) 備(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有機(jī)會(huì)重訪(fǎng)天津。
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;
(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;
(3)開(kāi)頭己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
Im glad to hear from you.
Yours, Li Jin
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】Dear Mrs. Green,
Im so glad to hear from you. While it has been more than a year since you taught us English, Fve missed you a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, Fve been doing pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what Pm interested in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as much as I could about my city, Tianjin.
By the way, ifs my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since you left.
Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.
Yours, Li Jin
5.感謝信
[題型特點(diǎn)]
感謝信是重要的禮儀文書(shū),是向幫助、關(guān)心和支持過(guò)自己的集體或個(gè)人表示感謝的書(shū)信,有感謝和表?yè)P(yáng)雙重意思。其結(jié)構(gòu)為:
①點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信目的②描述事件經(jīng)過(guò)③再次表示感謝,表達(dá)回報(bào)心情
[常用句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) am writing to extend my thanks/convey my gratitude to you for...
我寫(xiě)這封信是因?yàn)楸磉_(dá)我對(duì)你的感激。
②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
在信中我要為.....向您表達(dá)我誠(chéng)摯的謝意。
③Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.Ifs one of the most wonderful gifts I ever got. 非常感謝你給我寄來(lái)的禮物,這是我收到的最好的禮物之一。
④Id like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
我謹(jǐn)借此機(jī)會(huì)表達(dá)對(duì)您給予我們及時(shí)的幫助和支持的感激。
⑤On behalf of my whole family,! would like to extend my sincere gratitude for... 我謹(jǐn)代表我全家對(duì).....表示真誠(chéng)的感激之情。
(6)1 will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by... 如果我有機(jī)會(huì)通過(guò).....報(bào)答你的好意,我會(huì)非蜿歎
⑦M(jìn)any thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to...
非常感謝你為幫助我們.....所做的扌。
2.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories,we will remember them forever. 沒(méi)有什么能抹掉我們美好的記憶,我們會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)牢記在心。
②Again,I would like Wexpress my warm thanks to you! /Thanks again for your kind help.
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我再次對(duì)你表示衷心的感謝。/對(duì)你的熱心幫助再次表示感謝。
③Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.
請(qǐng)接受我誠(chéng)摯的感謝和最美好的祝愿O
[黃金模板]
Dear ,(感謝對(duì)象)
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you for .(感謝的原因)If it had not been for your assistance in ,(對(duì)方給你的具體幫助)1 fear that I would have been .(沒(méi)有對(duì)方幫助的結(jié)果)
Everyone agrees that it was you who .(給出纟田節(jié))
Again,! would like to express my warm thanks to you (Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[范文鑒賞]
Dear Li Ping,
How about your life?rm writing to thank you for your warm reception during my visit to Beijing this summer holiday.(感謝的原因)
During the visit,! stayed at your home,and you cooked three delicious meals for me.And you showed me around quite a few places of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace.Besides,you took many beautiful photos of me.Whafs more,you went shopping with me. I really had a wonderful time.Another thing that I should mention is that your parents were so kind to drive us.(具體幫助的細(xì)節(jié))
Thank you for your kindness again and give my best regards to your parents.(再次感謝)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2023?浙江卷】應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作(滿(mǎn)分15分)
假定你是李華,經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友Alex即將期簪的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封
1.表示感謝;
2.回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助;
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of
English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.
Y ours,
Li Hua
[題型特點(diǎn)]
從推薦者的情況來(lái)分,可以分為自薦信和推薦信兩種。其結(jié)構(gòu)為:
推薦信①自我介紹及所推薦人物②推薦理由③期待對(duì)方回復(fù),并表示感謝 [常用句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi)m very pleased to learn that you are going to...Im writing this letter to offer my
recommendation.
得知你將.....我很高興,我寫(xiě)這封信是向你提供我的建議。
② Please allow me to introduce one of my best friends to you.
請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我向你介紹一位我最好的朋友。
(§)1 am writing to introduce one of my college classmates in Beijing.
我寫(xiě)信是要介紹一位我在北京時(shí)的大學(xué)同學(xué)。
④I am very glad to have this chance to write to you to...
我很高興能有這次機(jī)會(huì)給你寫(xiě)信
①The reason why I recommen^yis that...
我推薦.....的原因是 .....
②So I hold the belief that... be(am/is/are)quite suitable fbr the post.
所以我相信.....很適合這個(gè)職位。
3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①Thanks for your attention and hope to receive your reply.
多謝你的關(guān)注,希望能收到你的回復(fù)。
(2)1 would be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
如果你能對(duì)我予以仔細(xì)考慮我將不勝感激。
③I would be most grateful if you could lend due attention to this letter and contact me at...
如果你能給予此信一定的關(guān)注并通過(guò).....和我聯(lián)系,我將非常感激。
④Ill be more than happy if you can take my suggestions/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考慮我的建議/想法,我會(huì)非常高興。
[黃金模板1]
Dear
Im .(自我介紹)1 was asked to write to you to recommend (要推薦的人)to be/do (要做的職位或事情).
His/Her performance was outstanding.He/She is a diligent boy/girl,who can .(優(yōu)勢(shì) 一 )Whafs more, .(優(yōu) 勢(shì) 二)Em sure he/she can .Therefore,! here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.
If you have any questions about it,please contact me.
Looking forward to your coming.(表達(dá)期望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
[黃金模板2]
Dear ,
①I(mǎi)t affords me much pleasure to recommend (要推薦白勺人)to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my .③ As his/her I found hinVher (介紹與此人的關(guān)系).筋
④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding^ @First,he/she had been and showed great talents in .⑥In addition,he/she has a very pleasant personality. ?He has developed a strong sense of ,and forking with him is always.(8)1 can state that he/she has all the qualities of being .(介紹此人的能力)
?Therefore,! here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.?Should you favor him/her
V
with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university? I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.! look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[范文鑒賞]
Dear Peter,
Im Li Ming,Chairman of the Students5 Union. Ifs great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester. I was asked to write to you to recommend Li Hua,a Senior 3 student of 18,to be your assistant.(自我介紹;推薦人的情況)
Her performance in the school years was outstanding.Li Hua is a diligent girl,who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. Whafs more,she is one of the top ten students in our school,and her spoken English is extremely excellent.Tm sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.Therefore,I here recommend her to you with all my heart.(推薦人的優(yōu)勢(shì))
If you have any questions about it,please contact me.
Looking forward to your coming.(表達(dá)期望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【高考真題】
(2023-北京卷)
第一節(jié)
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化
感興趣,計(jì)劃明年來(lái)北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢(xún)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
(1)表示歡迎;
(2)推薦他上哪所大學(xué);
(3)建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。
注意:(1).詞數(shù)不少于50;
(2).開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文為提綱式作文,文章要求寫(xiě)推薦信,為英國(guó)朋友介紹北京的大學(xué)。首先可以介紹一下寫(xiě)作背景(Jim對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣,要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)),表達(dá)歡迎。然后推薦一所大學(xué),并 簡(jiǎn)要介紹推薦的原因(如大學(xué)的特色,可以學(xué)到什么等)。再次簡(jiǎn)單介紹應(yīng)該做哪方面的準(zhǔn) 備,如可以提前學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ),讀點(diǎn)有關(guān)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的書(shū),了解中國(guó)的習(xí)俗,讓自己更好地適 應(yīng)中國(guó)的生活。文章可釆用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)可以使用第二人稱(chēng)。
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】Dear Jim,
Fm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
建議信
[題型特點(diǎn)]
建議信是生活中常見(jiàn)的一種文體,是寫(xiě)信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫(xiě)給個(gè)人,也可能是寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu),信的內(nèi)容要包括寫(xiě)信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由。建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具合理性和說(shuō)服力。
具體寫(xiě)作步驟一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with,then,later,last but not least等依次陳述建議,具體結(jié)構(gòu)為:
①表明寫(xiě)作意圖
②具體的建議及理由
③指出釆納建議的好處
[常用句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.I am writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.
在讀了你的信后,我知道你在.....上有困難。我寫(xiě)這封信的目的是給你一些建議/幫助。
②Youve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding.. .and Fll try to make some useful suggestions here.
關(guān)于.....你向我征求建議,在此,我將盡力提出一些有用的建議。
③Im sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing...at the moment. 得知此刻你遇到.....麻煩我深感遺憾。
④Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how... 非常高興收到你的來(lái)信,在信中,關(guān)于如何.....你向我征求意見(jiàn)。
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)
①When it comes to/As for...I would like to suggest/recommend...
涉及/關(guān)于我想建議.....
②The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
我的建議如下。
(3)In my opinionZPersonally/As far as Im concerned,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看來(lái),釆取如下行動(dòng)是明智的。
④You may/might as well do...
你不妨做.....
⑤I would like to suggest that...
我想建議
⑥If I were you,! would...
如果我是你,我會(huì)
?It seems to me that you could...
我認(rèn)為你可以
⑧ I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我想如果你能.....可能會(huì)更有利。額
(Di hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望你認(rèn)為這些建議有幫助。/我希望我的建議對(duì)你有益。
② I hope you will take my advice into consideration. If you have any questions or requirements,please do not hesitate to tell me./If you have any questions,please feel free to ask me at any time.
我希望你會(huì)考慮我的建議。如果你有任何問(wèn)題或要求,請(qǐng)毫不猶豫地告訴我。/如果你 有任何問(wèn)題,請(qǐng)隨時(shí)問(wèn)我。
(§)1 believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。
[黃金模板1]
Dear ,(建議對(duì)象)
Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to .(引 出對(duì)方需要 建議的主題)
Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建議)First,it is important to .Then,it also helps to .Besides,it should be a good idea to .You can also .
可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議,如下:
As to , I suggest .(需要具體到某一方面)In addition, .(其他 的建議)Imsure .(預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果,給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心)
I hope .(表達(dá)愿望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[黃金模板2]
Dear
① You have asked me for my advice with regard to ,and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
(2)In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions: (建議的內(nèi)容).
(§)1 hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【高考真題】
(2023,北京卷)
你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來(lái)中國(guó)旅行,有兩條線(xiàn)路可以選擇:“長(zhǎng)江之 行”或者“泰山之旅"o Jim來(lái)信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.你建議的線(xiàn)路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50;
2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【滿(mǎn)分參考范文】
本文為提綱類(lèi)作文。首先,學(xué)生要仔細(xì)閱讀提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。其次,要注意提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。最后,要根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài),語(yǔ)態(tài);語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。本文是一封信,按照內(nèi)容要求可以確定文章的 框架結(jié)構(gòu),三段式,其中第一段寫(xiě)你所建議的路線(xiàn),第二部分是本文的主體,要闡述你所建 議的路線(xiàn)的原因,好讓 他們有很好的掌握,最后一段,提出你的祝愿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確 運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞,同時(shí)也要 合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Im happy to receive your letter and know you5re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thafs why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you511 have a good time in China.
Yours, Li Hua
道歉信
[題型特點(diǎn)]
道歉信是因過(guò)失或疏忽做錯(cuò)了事,給別人帶來(lái)了麻煩或損失,發(fā)覺(jué)后為了給對(duì)方賠禮道歉而寫(xiě)的信件。其結(jié)構(gòu)為:①表明寫(xiě)作意圖,對(duì)某事表示歉意②說(shuō)明道歉的具體原因③再次 表明歉意,請(qǐng)求諒解,并提出補(bǔ)救措施。
[常用句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) am writing this letter to apologize to you for...
我寫(xiě)這封信是因......向你道歉。
②I am writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you.
我寫(xiě)信向你表達(dá)我深深的歉意。
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)
(Di regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to...
我遺憾地告知你我不能......
(2)1 am sorry for my not being able to...due to the fact that...
我非常抱歉我不能.....因?yàn)?....
③Much to my regret J was unable to... and I wish that my apology could help to some extent. 很遺憾,我不能夠希望我的道歉在某種程度上能起到作用。
④I remember we planned to...but now because...I cannot...with you as planned.
我記得我們?cè)居?jì)劃.....但是現(xiàn)在由于.....我不能與你如期.....
⑤I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.
為此事可能給你帶來(lái)的任何不便,我深表歉意。
3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
?Once again,Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.
對(duì)于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
②I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 我衷心地希望你能夠站在我的角度考慮一下,并接經(jīng)蟲(chóng)歉。
④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies. 我衷心希望你能友好地接受我的例Q
[黃金模板]
Dear
..(陳述道歉原因)Now I am writing you this letter of
apology to show my deep regret.
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for
由)The reason for my delay/absence was/is that
I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your ..(提出*卜救措施)Once again,Fm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[范文鑒賞]
Dear Tom,
I am indeed very sorry that I am unable to go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.I feel sorry about it and want you to know what happened.(直接說(shuō) 出寫(xiě)信意圖)
Just now,my cousin Li Qiong,who left home for Australia for his further study last year5informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know,we havent seen each other for nearly a year.(說(shuō)明道歉的具體 原因)
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it.I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again,Pm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(再次希望對(duì)方接受道歉;提出補(bǔ)救措施)
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
祝賀信
[題型特點(diǎn)]
祝賀信應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容
1.如何獲得消息2.消息內(nèi)容3.得知消息后的激動(dòng)心情4.表達(dá)祝賀5.繼續(xù)保持業(yè)務(wù)/私人來(lái) 往6.送上祝賀語(yǔ)
[常用句式]
Wishing you a blessed St. Valentines Day and joyful holidays.
2.We want to wish you a happy Mothers day.
3.May your marriage be the beginning of a new period od domestic happiness!
4.Please accept our best and sincerest wishes for the New Year.
5.wishing you many happy returns of your birthday!
6.1 hope you receive my gift.Perhaps it will add a bit to your enjoyment on your birthday.
7.We wish we could be with you to share the occasion.
8.Congratulations on your latest promotion.! know that you will make good in your new job because you thrive on responsibility.
9.Congratulations on the completion and opening of a new office.
黃金模板
Dear ,
(Di have learned with delight that you (祝賀事由).②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on .③You must be .(4)And I feel very happy for you.
⑤ (所取得的成績(jī))is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to (被祝賀人過(guò)去的努力).⑦ It is a reward you richly deserve for your (被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)).
⑧Kindly let me know when you (咨詢(xún)對(duì)方何時(shí)有空).⑨I hope (表達(dá)自己的愿望).⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
投訴信
[題型特點(diǎn)]
在生活中,通常用寫(xiě)投訴信的方式解決諸如消費(fèi)利益受損、正常生活和工作受到干擾等問(wèn)題。
投訴信通常包括以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容:說(shuō)明投訴的原因并表示遺憾;實(shí)事求是地闡述問(wèn)題發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò),切記不要夸大其詞;指出問(wèn)題引起的后果;提出批評(píng)及處理的意見(jiàn)或敦促對(duì)方釆取措施,或者提出所希望的賠償以及補(bǔ)救方式。其結(jié)構(gòu)為:
①交代要投訴的問(wèn)題②描述投訴的原因、問(wèn)題的經(jīng)過(guò)及產(chǎn)生的后果③提出解決方案 投訴信
[常用句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at...
我寫(xiě)此信表達(dá)我對(duì).....的不滿(mǎn)。
②Im...who bought...fromyour website several days ago.I am writing to complain about... 我是幾天前從你們的網(wǎng)站上購(gòu)買(mǎi)了.....的.....。我寫(xiě)價(jià)毅竄
(3)1 was very disappointed to see...
我非常失望地發(fā)現(xiàn)
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)
(Di have suffered a lot of pains.
(2)1 can hardly put up with it
我再也無(wú)法容忍它。
(§)1 am completely disappointed to find...To improve the situation,it is advisable for you to take the following measures./I do hope that someone will take effective measures to deal with this matter.
當(dāng)我發(fā)現(xiàn).....我徹底失望了。為了改進(jìn)這種情況,建議你釆取以下措施。/我真的希望 有人能釆取有效措施解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。
3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) would be very delighted if you could consider my complaint seriously.I do hope...will be improved as soon as possible./I do hope you can give me a satisfactory reply as soon as possible.Thank you for your consideration.
如果你能認(rèn)真對(duì)待我的投訴,我會(huì)非常高興。我確實(shí)希望.....將會(huì)盡快得到改善。/我 確實(shí)希望你可以盡快給我一個(gè)滿(mǎn)意的答復(fù)。感謝你的體諒。
② If you do not solve this problem, I will/shall... 如果你們不解決這一問(wèn)題,我將.....
D...refund the cost and pay me damages.
.....退回費(fèi)用并賠償我的損失。
(4)1 hope you will kindly investigate...
我希望你對(duì).....進(jìn)行調(diào)查。
⑤I would like you to get this matter settled by the end of this month.
我想讓你月底前解決這件事情。
[黃金模板1]
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is/Fm .(自我介紹)1 am writing to you for something/to tell you something about (投訴的內(nèi)容).
.(簡(jiǎn)述導(dǎo)致矛盾的事件)1 .(表達(dá)本人曾做過(guò)的努 力)But .(投訴原因一Resides, .(投訴原因二)To be frank,
?Under these circumstances,! find it (感覺(jué))to
的后果)
⑦ I appreciate it very much if you could (提出建議和請(qǐng)求),preferably (進(jìn)一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by (設(shè)定解決事情最后期限).⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
[范文鑒賞]
Dear Headmaster,
I am a student in Class One,Grade Two and I am Li Hua.RecentlyJ have found that the waste in our school is very serious.If you go around the school,you will find the lights are burning day and night.In addition,you will also find taps running all the time. In the dining room,food is thrown
away everywhere and there are a lot of useful things in the litter bins.(自我介紹; 投訴內(nèi)容)
Faced with these phenomena,! feel worried.Although our country is becoming richer and richer now,we still need to save everything because saving is one of virtues of the Chinese.Do you agree with what I said?Would you like to ask all the students to promote saving and oppose waste?I am expecting your answer.(投訴原因;期待解決方案)
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
求助信
[題型特點(diǎn)]
求助信是指寫(xiě)信人就某一個(gè)問(wèn)題向收信人尋求幫助,希望收信人就寫(xiě)信人提出的問(wèn)題提 供幫助或給出針對(duì)性的解決方法。其結(jié)構(gòu)為:
求助信①點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信目的,清楚表明要尋求什么樣的幫助②具體講述自己的困難,再提出 請(qǐng)求③誠(chéng)懇地提出希望,表達(dá)需要得到幫助的迫切心情*表示感謝
[常用句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①M(fèi)y namewriting to you for some help.
我的名字是......我寫(xiě)信向你求助1
②Fm writing a letter to you to get some help about...
我給你寫(xiě)信是想得到......方面的一些幫助。
(3)1 am writing to ask you to do me a favor.I have some difficulty in doing...,which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我寫(xiě)信向你求助。我在做方面有困難,這很困擾我。所以我別無(wú)選擇只能向你求助。
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) have met much difficulty in...
我在......方面遇到了很多困難。
②In the meanwhile/At the same time,I beg you to...so that...
同時(shí),我請(qǐng)求你......這樣......
③Im eager to get your timely help./Fm eager for your timely help.
我渴望得到你及時(shí)的幫助。
④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties,I have to turn to you for help.
面對(duì)如此多的困難,我不得不向你求助。
3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) will be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a
favor and...
如果你能幫助我.....我會(huì)非常感激。
②We do hope you can give us some advice.
我們非常希望你能給我們一些建議。
③Looking forward to your reply.And Fd be really thankful. 期待你的回復(fù)。我非常感激。
[黃金模板1]
Dear Sir/Madam,
Im .(自我介紹)Im writing to get some help about .(說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目
的)
Looking forward to your reply.(表達(dá)期望)
Yours truly,
①I(mǎi) am writing to formally request to
②The reason for is that (給出原因).(§)1 : I—(給出細(xì)節(jié)).
④I would also like to request (提出迸一步的要求).⑤lam sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests. ?If you have any questions,do not hesitate to contact me at (電話(huà)號(hào)碼).(§)1 look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【高考真題】
(2023-全國(guó)I卷)
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua.I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a fkvor.(寫(xiě)信 目 的)
In order to get some practical experience,! am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume.But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume,so I dont know if there is something to pay attention to.(講述困難)So,Im writing you the letter,hoping you can give me some help.I will be very grateful if you can do me the fkvor.(提出請(qǐng)求)
Looking forward to your reply.And Id be really thankful.(表達(dá)期望)
Yours,
Li Hua
普通書(shū)信/電子郵件
[題型特點(diǎn)]
英文e-mail和普通書(shū)信的寫(xiě)法和格式大體相同,其開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾常常都會(huì)給出,正文可 根據(jù)作文要求分段把內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚即可。
[常用句式]
1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi) am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
我很高興收到你兩星期前寄給我的信。
②How are you getting along with...
你近來(lái)進(jìn)展如何?
③Sorry to reply to your letter so late.
抱歉這么晚才給你回信。
④There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.
再也沒(méi)有比收到你的春.信更讓我開(kāi)心的了。
⑤I received your e-mail(yesterday/last week/this morning...)
我(昨天/上周/今天早上.....)收到了你的電子郵件。
⑥Your e-mail has been received.
你的郵件已經(jīng)收到。
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)
(Drve been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter.In my opinion,you should...
我一直在思考你信中提到的問(wèn)題。在我看來(lái),你應(yīng)該.....
(2)If necessary,we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.
如果有必要,本周我們可以找個(gè)時(shí)間安排一次面談。
3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①I(mǎi)ll greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
請(qǐng)?jiān)诜奖銜r(shí)盡早回信,我將非常感激。
(2)Give my best regards/wishes to your mother.
代我向你的母親表示良好的祝愿。
(§)1 am looking forward to your earliest reply.
盼望著你早日回復(fù)。
?Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
盼望能盡快收到你的來(lái)信。
[黃金模板]
D ear ,
Im .1 am writing to talk about .(提出主題)1 like it very much mainly for the following reasons.First, , I think,are/is very popular with .(原因 一)Whafs more,along with there are .(原因二)However, .Therefore,rd like to suggest .(個(gè)人看法)
Best regards.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
[范文鑒賞]
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirrora regular reader of your
?
newspaper.I like it very much mainly for following two reasons.Firstjt covers both national and international news so that,by simply turning the pages] can learn all important things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,which help me how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.(具體原因)
As a young student,! suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.(個(gè)人看法; 祝愿)
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【高考真題1】
[2023-北京卷】
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim打算暑假期間來(lái)北京、天津和上
海旅游,發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1.交通出行;
2.必備衣物。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)不少于50;
2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
【參考范文】Dear Jim,
Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and T11 show stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed
...
trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,要求給朋友寫(xiě)回信。
【詳解】紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華的英國(guó)好友Jim打算暑假期間來(lái)北京、天津和上海旅游,發(fā) 來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。要求給他回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行;2.必備衣物。本文時(shí)態(tài) 應(yīng)釆用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),用第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。文章可以分為三部分來(lái)寫(xiě): 首先表達(dá)歡迎Jim來(lái)中國(guó);然后交代交通出行和必備衣物;最后盼望朋友的到來(lái)。注意使用 高級(jí)詞匯和句式,為文章增添色彩;注意使用連接詞、銜接詞,使文章自然、流暢。
【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言表述流暢。文章使用了幾個(gè)高分句型o thatyou5re coming to tour in China.禾口 that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around.是賓語(yǔ)從句。 where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
【高考真題】
[2023-天津卷】
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津,英國(guó)友好校將派教師來(lái)你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動(dòng)。
活動(dòng)期間,英方教師Chris將做一個(gè)有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意 見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫(xiě)一封電子郵件:
(1)你喜歡的講座話(huà)題(從音樂(lè)、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一);
(2)選擇該話(huà)題的原因及關(guān)于該話(huà)題你感興趣的內(nèi)容;
(3)希望從中有何收獲。
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)不少于100:
(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;
(3)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己給出、不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文,我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前,一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn),理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累,寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外,還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【參考范文】
Dear Chris,
Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity, you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note, music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music, among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz, and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
舉報(bào)/反饋