gre argument205提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：社會治安

　　gre argument 205題目：

　　The following appeared in a recommendation from the president of Amburgs Chamber of Commerce.

　　Last October the city of Belleville installed high intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined almost immediately. The city of Amburg has recently begun police patrols on bicycles in its business district but the rate of vandalism there remains constant. Since high intensity lighting is apparently the most effective way to combat crime, we should install such lighting throughout Amburg. By reducing crime in this way, we can revitalize the declining neighborhoods in our city.

　　提綱：

　　The president unfairly assumes that it is the installation of high intensity lighting that resulted in the decline in vandalism in Belleville.

　　Belleville and Amburg might not be comparable at many aspects.

　　The author fails to point out in what places do most vandalism at Amburg take place, thus we cannot evaluate if the police patrols are ineffective.

　　The president ignores many other effective ways to combat crime.

　　The president fails to consider the cost of installing high intensity lighting throughout Amburg and if we could afford it.

　　Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, the necessity of installing the lighting all over Amburg is open to doubt.

　　Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, we cannot guarantee that it would deter other types of crimes since vandalism is not the only type of crime in Amburg.

　　The president unfairly assumes that the proposed actions would sufficiently guarantee revitalization of city neighborhoods.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：社會治安

　　gre argument 205題目：

　　The following appeared in a recommendation from the president of Amburgs Chamber of Commerce.

　　Last October the city of Belleville installed high intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined almost immediately. The city of Amburg has recently begun police patrols on bicycles in its business district but the rate of vandalism there remains constant. Since high intensity lighting is apparently the most effective way to combat crime, we should install such lighting throughout Amburg. By reducing crime in this way, we can revitalize the declining neighborhoods in our city.

　　提綱：

　　The president unfairly assumes that it is the installation of high intensity lighting that resulted in the decline in vandalism in Belleville.

　　Belleville and Amburg might not be comparable at many aspects.

　　The author fails to point out in what places do most vandalism at Amburg take place, thus we cannot evaluate if the police patrols are ineffective.

　　The president ignores many other effective ways to combat crime.

　　The president fails to consider the cost of installing high intensity lighting throughout Amburg and if we could afford it.

　　Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, the necessity of installing the lighting all over Amburg is open to doubt.

　　Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, we cannot guarantee that it would deter other types of crimes since vandalism is not the only type of crime in Amburg.

　　The president unfairly assumes that the proposed actions would sufficiently guarantee revitalization of city neighborhoods.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。