名師指導雅思大作文的常見論點
考生們都知道雅思考官在評判一篇大作文時，除了看文章的結構和語言之外，還很重視這篇文章的主體內容。而中國考生在寫essay時常見的一個問題恰恰是考前準備了語言，臨場讀懂了題目，很快形成了觀點，但是卻不知該從哪些角度來支持自己的thesis statement。所以主體段落觀點單調，思維陳舊，內容空洞，為達到字數而把一個觀點寫了再寫等問題常常會充斥在文章的body part。這極大地影響了考生的作文成績。在此，筆者將多年積累的雅思大作文常見論點總結為一首打油詩，以饗讀者。
論文觀點角度多;
肉體靈魂不放過;
權利平等要把握;
文化道德思路擴;
結合話題多思索;
科技和經濟
在雅思論文主體部分寫作中，科技角度是使用頻率最高的角度。絕大多數作文的話題都可以從科技發展對人的生活帶來的影響這個角度來加以分析。例如：
討論是否將動物用于科學實驗：
Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism and capitalism which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men. Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account.
壓力大的原因：
親情淡漠的原因：
The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.
Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like.
The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.
Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.
1.高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性。
There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.
Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.
For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.
權利和平等
四方的文化在一定程度上可以濃縮為：權利、平等和自由。中國考生在人們該不該做什么事情或行為的時候應該多從這個方面去說服考官。
在寫到環境的重要性時，可以說：
All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being.
在寫到小孩子是否應該對自己犯的罪負責時，可以說：
在寫到傳統的西方道德中對私有財產的尊重時，可以說：
運動員是否應該拿高薪：
Young peoples inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps.
文化和道德
文化和道德本來就是雅四大作文中較難的兩個話題，而近來這兩個話題考的頻率又很高。考生不防也從這兩個角度來準備一下主體段落的觀點。
反對強勢文化入侵：
Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.
The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on ones personality.
總之，在大作文的主體段落寫作過程中，考生可以將以上的思路結合題目的特點綜合應用，切忌生搬硬套。平時在讀文章時也要多總結別人的觀點角度，而后為我所用。這樣定能讓你逐漸形成西方的思維習慣，在考試中能才思泉涌，下筆有神。
考生們都知道雅思考官在評判一篇大作文時，除了看文章的結構和語言之外，還很重視這篇文章的主體內容。而中國考生在寫essay時常見的一個問題恰恰是考前準備了語言，臨場讀懂了題目，很快形成了觀點，但是卻不知該從哪些角度來支持自己的thesis statement。所以主體段落觀點單調，思維陳舊，內容空洞，為達到字數而把一個觀點寫了再寫等問題常常會充斥在文章的body part。這極大地影響了考生的作文成績。在此，筆者將多年積累的雅思大作文常見論點總結為一首打油詩，以饗讀者。
論文觀點角度多;
肉體靈魂不放過;
權利平等要把握;
文化道德思路擴;
結合話題多思索;
科技和經濟
在雅思論文主體部分寫作中，科技角度是使用頻率最高的角度。絕大多數作文的話題都可以從科技發展對人的生活帶來的影響這個角度來加以分析。例如：
討論是否將動物用于科學實驗：
Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism and capitalism which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men. Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account.
壓力大的原因：
親情淡漠的原因：
The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.
Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like.
The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.
Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.
1.高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性。
There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.
Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.
For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.
權利和平等
四方的文化在一定程度上可以濃縮為：權利、平等和自由。中國考生在人們該不該做什么事情或行為的時候應該多從這個方面去說服考官。
在寫到環境的重要性時，可以說：
All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being.
在寫到小孩子是否應該對自己犯的罪負責時，可以說：
在寫到傳統的西方道德中對私有財產的尊重時，可以說：
運動員是否應該拿高薪：
Young peoples inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps.
文化和道德
文化和道德本來就是雅四大作文中較難的兩個話題，而近來這兩個話題考的頻率又很高。考生不防也從這兩個角度來準備一下主體段落的觀點。
反對強勢文化入侵：
Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.
The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on ones personality.
總之，在大作文的主體段落寫作過程中，考生可以將以上的思路結合題目的特點綜合應用，切忌生搬硬套。平時在讀文章時也要多總結別人的觀點角度，而后為我所用。這樣定能讓你逐漸形成西方的思維習慣，在考試中能才思泉涌，下筆有神。
