2024年高考第二輪復習英語（廣東版）專題升級訓練卷十七寫作綜合訓練卷（三）
2024年高考第二輪復習英語廣東版
專題升級訓練十七 寫作綜合訓練（三）
A組
第一節 基礎寫作
以下是一則關于首屆中學生“春晚”的報道的主要內容。
主題 首屆全國中學生“春晚”
——“輪到我們了”
組織者 一群廣州中學生
時間 2024年1月15日，節目時長180分鐘
內容 學生喜歡的各種節目，如街舞等
特色 1．自編、自導、自演
2．傳統節目與新潮節目的結合
目的 1．給中學生提供展現才華的機會
2．讓觀眾更多地了解嶺南文化
參考詞匯：首屆全國中學生“春晚”：the first National Middle School Students' Spring Festival Show
【寫作內容】
請根據以上內容用英語報道這一則校園資訊。內容包括：
1．晚會的基本信息。
2．晚會的目的與特色。
【寫作要求】
只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
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參考范文：
A group of students from Guangzhou plan to hold the first National Middle School Students' Spring Festival Show. The three-hour show with its theme “It's Our Turn” will be held on Jan. 15th. The performances, all organized, directed and performed by the students themselves, will combine traditional styles with more modern ones that students today are greatly interested in, such as street dancing and B-Box. The show gives a good chance for middle school students to show their talent to the world. It will also be a great chance for the audiences to learn more about Ling Nan culture.
第二節 讀寫任務
閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Wang Yue，who was two years old，wandered away from her home in Foshan while her mother was quickly collecting laundry during a thunderstorm.She walked into a narrow，busy market street.Closed-circuit television cameras（閉路電視攝像機）captured the child wandering into the street.In only a few moments of her appearance on the screen，Wang Yue is struck by a white van（貨車），knocked to the ground and goes under the van's front wheels.The van driver pauses，but does not get out.After a moment，he pulls forward slowly，at which time his rear wheel drives over Wang.The driver moves on.Subsequently，at least 18 people walk past her，and fail to assist her，some pausing to stare before moving on.In that time，another large truck runs over Wang's legs with both front and back tires.She is eventually helped by a female who collects rubbish，Chen Xianmei.It is apparent in the video that Wang is crying，holding her head，moving her arms and legs，and bleeding.However，seven days later，the lovely girl died of brain failure.Wang's parents Wang Chichang and Qu Feifei chose not to blame anyone besides themselves for their daughter's death.Qu said “Granny Chen represents the best of human nature；it's the nicest and most natural side of us.”The drivers of both vehicles were kept by police in the days after the incident.
Closed-circuit film of the incident was broadcast by a local television station，then posted on-line.The film resulted in worldwide news reports and caused dozens of editorials（社論）and millions of posts on social media sites，the majority criticizing the callousness（冷漠）and cruelty of those who passed Wang Yue without helping her.
According to China Daily，“At least 10 Party and government departments and organizations in Guangdong，including the province's commission on politics and law，the women's federation，the Academy of Social Sciences，and the Communist Youth League，have started discussions on punishing those who refuse to help people who clearly need it.”
【寫作內容】
1．以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容。
2．然后以約120個詞就“是否應該助人”為主題進行議論，內容包括：
（1）你閱讀短文后的感受。
（2）假如你在現場的話，你會如何做？
（3）你認為應該怎樣做才能避免這樣的悲劇再次發生？
【寫作要求】
1．你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料中的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2．文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
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________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
Two-year-old Wang Yue died in a traffic accident near a market in Foshan without receiving timely help from truck drivers and passers-by.This aroused the criticism for their indifference and cruelty and led to a heated discussion on punishing those who refuse to give help.
After reading the report，I feel really shocked.How can anyone be so cold-hearted and turn a blind eye towards the victim？The passers-by should be criticized for their indifference and the two drivers must be severely punished for their hit-and-run behavior.
Had I happened to be there，I would have tried to do something helpful，like stopping the truck or the van hitting Yue Yue，calling 120 for an ambulance and asking others nearby to help get her parents.
To stop such tragedy from happening again，something must be done.First，the government should encourage people to help others in times of emergency and protect helpers so that anyone can offer assistance without any worries that the victims may sue them for compensation.Besides，parents should look after their young children responsibly.Last but not least，the media should spare no effort to praise those kind-hearted people and give correct guidance to the public.
B組
第一節 基礎寫作
以下是你校英語辯論會的情況。
*學科競賽：academic competition
【寫作內容】
根據以上辯論會情況為某英文報寫一篇報道，內容包括：
1．辯論的時間及主題。
2．辯論的內容和啟示。
【寫作要求】
只能用5個句子表達全部內容。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
A debate on the “Advantages and disadvantages of students' attending academic competitions” was carried out last Thursday in our school.Those who support it hold the views that such competitions can stimulate their interest in a specific subject，promote the understanding of the subject and foster the spirit to explore.However，those who are against it argued that academic competitions are disturbing their normal studies，which will lead to unbalanced learning and frustration.Some students may even suffer from physical and mental problems because of unbearable pressure to win the contest.From the debate we learned that every coin has two sides and we should deal with things appropriately.
第二節 讀寫任務
Nowadays，a brand new way of shopping is attracting increasing customers：online group buying，also known as collective buying，which offers products and services at reduced prices on the condition that a minimum number of buyers would make the purchase.Origins of group buying can be traced to China where group buying or team buying was executed to get discount prices when a large group of people were willing to buy the same item.
China group buying transaction volume hit $1.74 billion （RMB 11 billion）in 2011，up 550% from the same period in 2010，according to a report by Tuan800.com，the Beijing-based daily deal sites aggregator.The report also shows that 2011 was the year that the Chinese Group-buying market got more and more concentrated with more and more Chinese，
most of whom are white collars，teenagers and college students enjoying the benefits of group buying.And among the most favorable buying categories are restaurant，movie and hotel booking for travelling.
Through group buying，on one hand，customers get a lower price than normal.On the other hand，businessmen also cut down expenses on marketing.That is the reason why group buying websites spring up like mushrooms in recent months.What is the most attractive in group buying must be the unbelievable discounts.Facing the discounts，customers always couldn't resist the impulse to buy the products，even though they do not need them.
【寫作內容】
1．以約30個詞概括短文的要點。
2．以約120個詞寫一篇關于“團購”的短文，至少包括以下的內容要點：
（1）你對團購的看法并陳述理由。
（2）談談你自己或他人的一次團購經歷。
（3）請你給團購者一些有用的建議。
【寫作要求】
1．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，或其他論述方法，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語句連貫。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
The passage introduces the concept of group buying and its origins.Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China，resulting from the discounts given.
From my point of view，the advantages of group buying are obvious.For one thing，by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price.For another，manufacturers can sell goods on a larger scale and reduce marketing expenses.
Last week，I surfed a well-known group buying website for two film tickets.With only 30 yuan，I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea which saved me so much.It was a very nice experience.
As for suggestions for group buying，firstly，you should read the advertisements and the comments from other customers carefully.Secondly，buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is.Thirdly，it is better to shop on famous and reliable websites to avoid being cheated by some cheating websites.
2024年高考第二輪復習英語廣東版
專題升級訓練十七 寫作綜合訓練（三）
A組
第一節 基礎寫作
以下是一則關于首屆中學生“春晚”的報道的主要內容。
主題 首屆全國中學生“春晚”
——“輪到我們了”
組織者 一群廣州中學生
時間 2024年1月15日，節目時長180分鐘
內容 學生喜歡的各種節目，如街舞等
特色 1．自編、自導、自演
2．傳統節目與新潮節目的結合
目的 1．給中學生提供展現才華的機會
2．讓觀眾更多地了解嶺南文化
參考詞匯：首屆全國中學生“春晚”：the first National Middle School Students' Spring Festival Show
【寫作內容】
請根據以上內容用英語報道這一則校園資訊。內容包括：
1．晚會的基本信息。
2．晚會的目的與特色。
【寫作要求】
只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
A group of students from Guangzhou plan to hold the first National Middle School Students' Spring Festival Show. The three-hour show with its theme “It's Our Turn” will be held on Jan. 15th. The performances, all organized, directed and performed by the students themselves, will combine traditional styles with more modern ones that students today are greatly interested in, such as street dancing and B-Box. The show gives a good chance for middle school students to show their talent to the world. It will also be a great chance for the audiences to learn more about Ling Nan culture.
第二節 讀寫任務
閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Wang Yue，who was two years old，wandered away from her home in Foshan while her mother was quickly collecting laundry during a thunderstorm.She walked into a narrow，busy market street.Closed-circuit television cameras（閉路電視攝像機）captured the child wandering into the street.In only a few moments of her appearance on the screen，Wang Yue is struck by a white van（貨車），knocked to the ground and goes under the van's front wheels.The van driver pauses，but does not get out.After a moment，he pulls forward slowly，at which time his rear wheel drives over Wang.The driver moves on.Subsequently，at least 18 people walk past her，and fail to assist her，some pausing to stare before moving on.In that time，another large truck runs over Wang's legs with both front and back tires.She is eventually helped by a female who collects rubbish，Chen Xianmei.It is apparent in the video that Wang is crying，holding her head，moving her arms and legs，and bleeding.However，seven days later，the lovely girl died of brain failure.Wang's parents Wang Chichang and Qu Feifei chose not to blame anyone besides themselves for their daughter's death.Qu said “Granny Chen represents the best of human nature；it's the nicest and most natural side of us.”The drivers of both vehicles were kept by police in the days after the incident.
Closed-circuit film of the incident was broadcast by a local television station，then posted on-line.The film resulted in worldwide news reports and caused dozens of editorials（社論）and millions of posts on social media sites，the majority criticizing the callousness（冷漠）and cruelty of those who passed Wang Yue without helping her.
According to China Daily，“At least 10 Party and government departments and organizations in Guangdong，including the province's commission on politics and law，the women's federation，the Academy of Social Sciences，and the Communist Youth League，have started discussions on punishing those who refuse to help people who clearly need it.”
【寫作內容】
1．以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容。
2．然后以約120個詞就“是否應該助人”為主題進行議論，內容包括：
（1）你閱讀短文后的感受。
（2）假如你在現場的話，你會如何做？
（3）你認為應該怎樣做才能避免這樣的悲劇再次發生？
【寫作要求】
1．你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料中的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2．文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
Two-year-old Wang Yue died in a traffic accident near a market in Foshan without receiving timely help from truck drivers and passers-by.This aroused the criticism for their indifference and cruelty and led to a heated discussion on punishing those who refuse to give help.
After reading the report，I feel really shocked.How can anyone be so cold-hearted and turn a blind eye towards the victim？The passers-by should be criticized for their indifference and the two drivers must be severely punished for their hit-and-run behavior.
Had I happened to be there，I would have tried to do something helpful，like stopping the truck or the van hitting Yue Yue，calling 120 for an ambulance and asking others nearby to help get her parents.
To stop such tragedy from happening again，something must be done.First，the government should encourage people to help others in times of emergency and protect helpers so that anyone can offer assistance without any worries that the victims may sue them for compensation.Besides，parents should look after their young children responsibly.Last but not least，the media should spare no effort to praise those kind-hearted people and give correct guidance to the public.
B組
第一節 基礎寫作
以下是你校英語辯論會的情況。
*學科競賽：academic competition
【寫作內容】
根據以上辯論會情況為某英文報寫一篇報道，內容包括：
1．辯論的時間及主題。
2．辯論的內容和啟示。
【寫作要求】
只能用5個句子表達全部內容。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
A debate on the “Advantages and disadvantages of students' attending academic competitions” was carried out last Thursday in our school.Those who support it hold the views that such competitions can stimulate their interest in a specific subject，promote the understanding of the subject and foster the spirit to explore.However，those who are against it argued that academic competitions are disturbing their normal studies，which will lead to unbalanced learning and frustration.Some students may even suffer from physical and mental problems because of unbearable pressure to win the contest.From the debate we learned that every coin has two sides and we should deal with things appropriately.
第二節 讀寫任務
Nowadays，a brand new way of shopping is attracting increasing customers：online group buying，also known as collective buying，which offers products and services at reduced prices on the condition that a minimum number of buyers would make the purchase.Origins of group buying can be traced to China where group buying or team buying was executed to get discount prices when a large group of people were willing to buy the same item.
China group buying transaction volume hit $1.74 billion （RMB 11 billion）in 2011，up 550% from the same period in 2010，according to a report by Tuan800.com，the Beijing-based daily deal sites aggregator.The report also shows that 2011 was the year that the Chinese Group-buying market got more and more concentrated with more and more Chinese，
most of whom are white collars，teenagers and college students enjoying the benefits of group buying.And among the most favorable buying categories are restaurant，movie and hotel booking for travelling.
Through group buying，on one hand，customers get a lower price than normal.On the other hand，businessmen also cut down expenses on marketing.That is the reason why group buying websites spring up like mushrooms in recent months.What is the most attractive in group buying must be the unbelievable discounts.Facing the discounts，customers always couldn't resist the impulse to buy the products，even though they do not need them.
【寫作內容】
1．以約30個詞概括短文的要點。
2．以約120個詞寫一篇關于“團購”的短文，至少包括以下的內容要點：
（1）你對團購的看法并陳述理由。
（2）談談你自己或他人的一次團購經歷。
（3）請你給團購者一些有用的建議。
【寫作要求】
1．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，或其他論述方法，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語句連貫。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
The passage introduces the concept of group buying and its origins.Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China，resulting from the discounts given.
From my point of view，the advantages of group buying are obvious.For one thing，by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price.For another，manufacturers can sell goods on a larger scale and reduce marketing expenses.
Last week，I surfed a well-known group buying website for two film tickets.With only 30 yuan，I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea which saved me so much.It was a very nice experience.
As for suggestions for group buying，firstly，you should read the advertisements and the comments from other customers carefully.Secondly，buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is.Thirdly，it is better to shop on famous and reliable websites to avoid being cheated by some cheating websites.
