2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（13）附參考范文

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　　高考英語書面表達講義：要點作文

　　(3)(25 min.)

　　(2024·益陽一中月考)假如你是李明，你同學李華來信說自己每次遇到重要考試，都會出現一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封回信，信的內容應包括下列要點：

　　焦慮癥狀：頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

　　建議：

　　1. 考前制定好合適的復習計劃；

　　2. 考試期間正常作息；

　　3. 睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠；

　　4. 其他建議(內容由考生自己擬定)。

　　注意：

　　1. 根據以上內容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。

　　2. 要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；

　　3. 詞數：不少于120。

　　參考詞匯：頭暈—dizzy(adj.)

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　　【參考范文】One possible version：

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　Thanks for your letter. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

　　Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and others will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

　　First of all, in my opinion, it's important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

　　Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us to have a sound sleep.

　　We'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.

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　　(8)(25 min.)

　　請以“特殊的寒假作業”為題，描述下面這幅漫畫的內容，并談談你的看法。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數：不少于120；

　　2．參考詞匯：作業—n. assignment　盆—n. basin　美德—n. virtue ________________________________________________________________________

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　　參考范文

　　One possible version：

　　A special Assignment in the Winter Vacation

　　One night Xiao Ming's parents are watching TV when Xiao Ming comes in with a basin of water in his hands. His mother feels very puzzled, asking, “Xiao Ming, why are you staying here instead of doing your homework？” Xiao Ming smiles, saying, “ Mother and father, I come here to wash the feet for you. This is one of our assignments in the winter vacation.”

　　I think it is a good idea. Respecting parents is one of the good virtues of the Chinese people. But at present many pupils are only-children in their families. They are often spoiled and don't know how to care for others. By washing feet and pouring cups of tea for parents, children will learn to respect parents and care for others. In the future, they will certainly become useful persons with good manners.

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　　（廣東卷）寫作(共兩節，滿分40分第二節：讀寫任務

　　閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文

　　When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able（http://www.unjs.com） to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.

　　He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) 安定wanted to go homes as soon as possible.

　　He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.

　　[寫作內容]

　　1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

　　2. 以約120個詞講述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的經歷，內容包括：

　　⑴時間、地點和起因；

　　想家給學習和生活帶來的影響；

　　你（或你朋友）是如何應對的。

　　[寫作要求]

　　1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　[評分標準]

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容何時，語句連貫。

　　The story is about what Sam felt about his first boarding school life. As a child, he never left his parents, so he didn’t get used to dealing with everything in school independently.

　　Once I had a similar experience. I finished my junior middle school in a boarding school. At the age of 13, I never delt with the daily things, such as washing clothes, taking care of money etc. especially I felt lonely because I hardly knew any people. At first, I could not get on well with my classmates and I always looked forward to being on holiday to meet my parents. I could not concentrate on my subjects. As time went by, I gradually adapted myself to the school life. I made several friends with our classmates and often took part in the activities, in which I improved my communicating skills. As I had a lot of interesting things to do, I finally enjoyed my school life.

　　Now, whenever I think of my first boarding school life, I think it instructive and unforgettable.

　　【解析】

　　1.這是一篇記敘文寫作。此話題貼近生活，因為幾乎每個學生都進過寄宿制學校，所以真實的經歷讓學生有話可寫；

　　2. 本寫作具有一定的開放性。它要求考生充分發揮自己的想象力并運用熟練的語言知識將其表達出來。這充分考查了考生的能力。

　　3. 注意文章的寫作內容要齊全，按要求該文章應分為段。第一段：概括；第二段：

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　　高考英語作文（經典好句）

　　（三）結尾句

　　1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.

　　解決這個問題的最有效的方法是……。如果那樣的話……

　　2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. For another, ______________.

　　任何事情都有它的兩個方面，AAA也不除外，一方面……另一方面……

　　3. My experience tells me that to ______________ need a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.

　　我的經驗告訴我……需要一個細心而又堅持不懈的過程，并且在這個過程中你最好遵守這其中涉及的規則。

　　4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.

　　總體上來說，這是我們認識到……的重要性的緊急時刻了。

　　5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.

　　因此，我們應該對……采取許多有效的措施

　　6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.

　　通過分析這些數據，我們可以得到那樣一個……的結論

　　7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.

　　一句話來說，整個社會應當對……的問題給予密切的關注。只有以這種方式才能在將來……

　　8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.

　　以我的觀點來看，我們應當對……的重要性給予重視

　　9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.

　　但是……和……具有它們自己的優勢。舉個例子，然而。對比這兩者，我更喜歡……

　　10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point (of……) lies in ______________.

　　以我的觀點來看，……就像……如果，它將非常有效。無論……重點在于……

　　11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.

　　他們的觀點正確嗎？我認為，第一個觀點看起來……。對于第二個觀點，……

　　12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believe that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.

　　一個普遍的說法是……。依我來看真正的觀點不是……而是……我相信只要……我們將會……所以我的觀點是……

　　13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.

　　以我的觀點來看，所有方面都部分正確。當我們……時，我們應當考慮問題的所有方面，并且做出正確的決定。

　　14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.

　　一己之見，我認為……。作為結果，我相信一個光明的未來在等待著我們，因為……

　　15. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.

　　人們逐漸認識到……的重要性，他們開始付出最大努力來……我們相信……

　　16. All in all, we cannot live without ______________. But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.

　　總之，我們不可能離開……來生活。但是同時對于即將出現的問題我們必須尋找新的方法來解決。

　　17. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

　　隨著社會的發展，……所以……是急切并且必要的。如果每個人心甘情愿的為社會做出貢獻，這將會好上加好。

　　18. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not ，In general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.

　　很難說……是好還是壞，一般情況下，它在很大程度上取決于……的情形。然而，從個人觀點來看我發現……

　　19. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end for the situation.

　　對于這樣的情形將有效的行動堅持到底是必要的。

　　20. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.

　　毋庸置疑的，對于……的問題我們必須給予特別的關注

　　21. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.

　　但是……和……都有缺點，舉例說……選擇哪一個？……或什么？在做出自己的決定時細心的考慮是必要的。

　　22. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.

　　通過上面的討論，我們將理智的得到……的結論。