成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（11）附參考范文

　　高考英語書面表達講義：日記

　　1．下面六幅圖畫描述了你和同學們2月8日去學校附近的湖上滑冰的情況。請根據圖畫內容用英語寫一篇日記。

　　注意：1.日記必須包括所有圖畫的內容，可適當增加細節，使短文連貫。

　　2.詞數100左右。

　　【參考范文】

　　February 8th,SundayFine

　　It was cold today. My classmates and I went skating on the lake. As soon as we got there, we began to skate happily. While enjoying myself, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care, the ice broke and he slipped into the water.

　　I was too frightened to know what to do. I anxiously ran to school to call my teacher for help. Hearing my cry, Mr.Zhang rushed over, telling us to phone 120 to call for doctors, and jumped into the lake to save Xiao Ming, who was struggling in the cold water. At last, he was saved and no sooner had doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital. It was not long before Xiao Ming's parents came. They expressed their thanks to Mr.Zhang.

　　What a respectable teacher he is!

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　　（5）

　　充分發揮你的想象力，寫一篇100詞左右的文章。題目為My Dream House。內容包括以下幾點：

　　1． 房子由什么建成；

　　2． 有什么優點（如：不怕水火、保溫隔熱、隨處移動等）；

　　3． 家具，能源。 One Possible Version

　　My Dream House

　　My dream house is made of a kind of special paper, which can't be easily destroyed by floods or fires. When floods hit our area, it can float on the surface of the water. And all the doors will be closed at once. The furniture in the house is also made of special materials, which can't be broken, either.

　　Our house can keep us warm in winter and cool in summer. We use solar energy instead of traditional fuels, so our house is environmentally friendly. Made of paper, it is so light that it can move to anywhere you like, what's more, it has wheels and wings.

　　Such is my dream house.

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　　你的家鄉是一個依山傍水的小鎮。過去，這里人們生活極其貧困。解放以后，人們生活的各個方面都發生了很大變化。請根據下面表格的提示，寫一篇120詞左右的短文，介紹該鎮的變化情況。

　　約20萬?

　　約360平方公里?

　　坐落在大山腳下，面臨一條大河，新建有許多工廠、商店、醫院、學校?

　　教育狀況? 解放前只有一所學校，只有富家子弟可以上學，現在有10所學校，每個孩子都可以上學?

　　豐富多彩，人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參加體育活動等?

　　參考范文

　　One Possible Version

　　My hometown is a small town. It has a population of more than 200 thousand people and an area of 36 square kilometers. It is at the foot of a mountain. In front of the town lies a big river.

　　Before liberation, people there lived a hard life. Great changes have taken place there since liberation. They have built many factories, shops, hospitals and schools.

　　The school education has also improved. Before liberation there was only one school. Only the rich children could go to school. Now there are 10 schools. Every child can go to school.

　　People's lives are colorful. After work they go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports. They all live a happy life.

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　　高考英語書面表達指導

　　英語書面表達經典句型必背

　　1.英語作文中常用關聯詞:

　　并列關系:and,as well as,also...

　　遞進關系:besides,in addition,moreover,what’s more... 

　　轉折關系:but,yet,however,although,otherwise,or,in spite of,despite,instead of,in the end... 

　　時間順序:while,when,soon after,before,afterward,finally,first,then,next,as soon as ...

　　比較、對比:like,unlike,on the contrary,on the other hand...

　　總結:in a word,in general,in short,above all,after all,generally speaking...

　　進一步闡述:in other words,that is to say,for example,for instance,such as ... 

　　因果關系:as a result,so,thus,therefore...

　　2.常用句式

　　記事

　　①At first he didn’t hear anything at all.

　　②But then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.

　　③Following that came a man’s voice,saying,“Come out,or I will break in!”

　　④Several minutes later,he heard someone leave.

　　⑤Finally he got up,opened the door and looked around.

　　寫人

　　①She is a girl of twelve years old.

　　②She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.

　　③Being kind and helpful,she always enjoys helping others out.

　　④In her spare time,she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.

　　⑤She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.

　　⑥There is a boy crying outside.

　　介紹某地

　　①Liaoning Province lies in the northeast of China.

　　②It is rich in many kinds of natural resources,such as coal and petrol.

　　③It has a population of 23 million.

　　④It is terribly cold in winter and very hot in summer there.

　　⑤The people there are friendly and hardworking and their hospitality will never fail to give you a deep impression.

　　⑥Our school covers 2.5 square miles.It lies in the north of the city.The teaching building stands in the front of the school,on its left is the administrative building,and on its right is a football field.After walking across a small bridge we can see our dining-hall.Four students’ dormitory buildings stand in line with a lot of trees around them and a river running by.

　　通知用語

　　①Attention,please!/May I have your attention,please!

　　②The sports meet to be held tomorrow is canceled due to the bad weather.

　　③A meeting is to be held in Room 203 at two o’clock tomorrow afternoon.

　　④Please take a pen and notebook with you and be there on time.

　　⑤That’s all,thank you!

　　寫信

　　①Dear Tom,I’m very glad to receive your letter.

　　②I am fine but very busy recently,learning English.

　　③I have been strictly following the advice given by you in your last letter and have made some progress so far.

　　④Please remember me to your parents.

　　⑤Yours truly,Li Ming.

　　議論和高級句型

　　①In my opinion,I prefer traveling by train rather than by plane.

　　②For one thing,a train ticket is much cheaper than a plane ticket.

　　③For another,you can enjoy the beautiful views outside the train window.

　　④Above all,it’s safer traveling on a train than traveling in a plane.

　　⑤In a word,I will always travel by train if I’m not in a great hurry.

　　6.I hold the view that we should wear school uniform all day.

　　7.From this passage we can draw a conclusion that drinking a lot is bad for our health.

　　8.From this diagram we can infer/it can be inferred that in 2008 the number of mobile phones will be twice as big as that now.

　　9.There are 95% of the students who think it is not useful to stay up to study at night because the next day they will feel very tired.

　　10.The fact leads us to believe most of us do get a good result in the NMET this year.

　　11.I am not for/am against/oppose/don’t agree to/object to the idea of building a new highway because of the great cost.

　　12.What I want to emphasize is the fact that they are only children.

　　13.Being a Senior three student,he will never let his parents down(使父母失望).

　　14.Having finished his homework,he went to bed.

　　15.Running,biking and swimming are popular in summer.

　　16.It took us only five yuan to buy this pen.This pen just costs five yuan.I only spent five yuan on/(in) buying this pen.I only paid five yuan for this pen.

　　17.It is said/reported/considered/thought that the more pressure you have,the worse result you will get.

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　　高考英語作文精選范文----應用文類

　　9. 假如你是校報負責人，急需在學校內聘一位同學任英文版的編輯，請你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”為題目寫一則招聘啟事。內容要如下：

　　⑴．該工作主要包括兩部分：一是從英文報刊雜志及互聯網上選擇適合學生的文章；二是選擇與編輯同學們的來稿。

　　⑵．希望該同學滿足下列要求：

　　① 樂意奉獻出一些業余時間為同學們服務； ② 英文與美術皆好；能熟練使用電腦。

　　③ 感興趣的同學請在本周內與學生會（Students’ Union）聯系。

　　注意：（1）詞數100左右；（2）不要逐字翻譯，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。

　　An English Editor Wanted

　　Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．

　　We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of

　　spare time to serving the others．Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine art the ability to use the computer is important．

　　Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week．

　　Students’ Union假定你是某市居民，名叫李華。你覺得該市出租車行業問題較多，請寫一封信給該市市長，內容應包括：問題 ?(1)停靠點太少，不易打的;(2)欺詐外地乘客;(3)車速過快，事故頻頻;(4)仍有拒載者;(5)深夜聚集在娛樂場所外等客時制造噪音，影響他人休息。建議?要求加強管理注意：1.字數100詞左右。文章開頭已給出。2.參考詞匯：繞道：take a roundabout route 不替別人著想的：inconsiderate (adj.) 行業：trade加強管理：tighten control over…Dear Mayor,

　　I’m a resident of the city. I feel there are many problems existing in the trade of taxi in our city. First of all, there are still not enough stops in the streets so it’s not easy to take a taxi. And taxis often run very fast, which causes many? traffic accidents. What’s more, some taxi drivers still refuse to pick up some passengers without any reason. Another terrible thing which often happens is that deep at night taxis waiting around the entertainment places make much noise. Many people suffer from this inconsiderate action. A friend of mine living in another city once visited me, and she told me our city’s taxi drivers cheated her by taking a roundabout route. What will a guest think of our city after such a bad experience?

　　I think we must take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade. Maybe the first thing to do is raise the taxi drivers’ professional morality.

　　We are looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua

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　　高考英語作文精選范文----應用文類

　　13. 下面是一個中學生給某報編輯部寫的一封信，仔細閱讀并就信的內容以編輯的名義給此中學生回一封信。

　　Dear editor.

　　I am an active girl, and I speak and laugh loudly in the classroom, like a boy. I don’t care about small matters. On the contrary, my neighbor, the girl who sits next to me, speaks quietly and dare not do the things I often do. I can understand this.

　　What I can’t stand is that she often gets angry with me about small things. How can I get along with her?

　　yours

　　Sunny,

　　注意：1．書信格式要規范；

　　2．回信需就原信內容給出至少三條建議（如談心，相互理解，參加他們的生日等活動，談論共同話題，分享快樂等等）；3)．字數：120左右。Dear Sunny,

　　It’s very good that you want to be friends with this girl. In my opinion, you’d better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her, because understanding each other is very important for you two. And I also think it’s better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities, such as birthday parties, going out for a walk, discussing some fashionable topics, and so on. Besides, helping each other is also very important for both of you. Just share happiness and sadness with her. And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain you two will be good friends in the future. Good luck to you.

　　Yours,

　　Editor

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　　高考英語作文精選范文----應用文類

　　14. 假如你是李華，針對目前有些中學生購買彩票的現象，給21st Century 報社編輯寫信，并談談自己的看法，其中包括以下要點：

　　．弊遠大于利；．中學生沒有經濟來源，容易誘發一些不良行為；

　　．從當前說，會影響學習；．從長遠看，會養成事事走捷徑的僥幸心理，其危害將影響其一生。

　　注意（1）信的開頭和結尾已經給出；（2）必須包括以上要點，可適當發揮，但不要逐句翻譯；（3）字數100左右，不包括開頭、結尾’d like to talk about my views on the phenomenon.

　　In my opinion , its disadvantages are far more than its advantages, despite one of their reasons that they can do something useful for society in this way . High school students can’t support themselves financially but depend on their parents for the moment. Thus, in order to collect money with which to buy lottery tickets, they may try every possible means , even commit crimes .

　　In addition, if they put their minds on lottery tickets, their lessons will be more or less affected. And in the long run, lottery ticket purchasing may contribute to their wrong understanding that there must be a shortcut to every destination , which will surely do great harm to their future life.

　　Therefore, I think it is necessary for them to keep away from lottery stations and concentrate on their studies for now.

　　Yours ,

　　Li Hua

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