考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文批改9

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, Yesterday I got the message from the newspaper that you are looking for a secretary and I am writing to you for applying it. I am graduated from XXuniversity majored in Chinese and Literature and I did well in in the past four years.Besides,I have experienced in a company as a secretary for six monthes.So if Ican get the chance to serve your company,Iam sure I will be competent for the position as soon as possible. Finally,I am looking forward to your reply sincerely. Yours LingMing

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, Yesterday I got the message from the newspaper that you are looking for a secretary and I am writing to you for applying it. I am graduated from XXuniversity(u大寫，XX University) majored in Chinese and Literature and I did well in in(去掉一個) the past four years. Besides, I have experienced in a company as a secretary for six monthes(months). So if I can get the chance to serve your company, Iam(I am或是Im) sure I will be competent for the position as soon as possible. Finally, I am looking forward to your reply sincerely. Yours LingMing(Yours sincerely，下一行LiMing) 點評：7-8分言簡意賅，條理分明。要注意細節上的問題。